this is my free writing

Use the above picture along with our description criteria poster and create your own description of the above picture.

Remember this is a DESCRIPTION, not a story!

Step One - write your 15-20 detailed sentenced

Step Two - write two sentences for each sense

Step Three - add your figurative language

Step Four - edit! Group your sentences, check their beginnings (make sure its not all the the the the the!!), check your full stops and capital letters and spelling!

* i can see a superhero on the moon fighting with alien wolf's his name is ? man his powers are fire,he can shoot plasma ball from his hand and his gun can shoot far but he can die from lighting  i can see the sun brightening into my eyes. and he can fly with his shoes