Jacob @ Tamaki Primary School

Friday, 28 June 2013

this is my free writing

Use the above picture along with our description criteria poster and create your own description of the above picture.

Remember this is a DESCRIPTION, not a story!

Step One - write your 15-20 detailed sentenced

Step Two - write two sentences for each sense

Step Three - add your figurative language

Step Four - edit! Group your sentences, check their beginnings (make sure its not all the the the the the!!), check your full stops and capital letters and spelling!

* i can see a superhero on the moon fighting with alien wolf's his name is ? man his powers are fire,he can shoot plasma ball from his hand and his gun can shoot far but he can die from lighting i can see the sun brightening into my eyes. and he can fly with his shoes