I am a Year 5 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Manuyag.
Wednesday, 6 November 2013
Friday, 1 November 2013
My Two Children (Narrative)
One day there was two kids the boy name was jack the girl name was Anthony they live in new york with a mum and dad when world war 2 was going so the mum and dad made the kid to go to New Zealand with their nana until the war stop so there can go back. is there mum and dad still going to be there when the war stop? there did the shopping for the nana when she sit down looking at the tv all day at night there make note to mum and dad to know if the are all right then nana came in the and said ‘go night’ in the daytime there nana was asleep in her room the kids went down stairs
to go eat and get back to go school for the first time but when there went to school a boy was hitting jack all over when he was done jack was crying on the ground so they went home. when the mum came outside for a run but when she something in the sky it was coming down fast as a gunshot she she BOMB!!! she run inside and got a key and went in a big bomb room so the bomb won't get them and the bomb hit and it went bang the mum and dad came out they did not want the kid came back so they went to them and they were happy
Wednesday, 30 October 2013
Running Away
One day a little girl walking the park the park was green as a grass the playground was big as a school and it was clean as a room.
then she want to go home now so she walk on the way back home then a man in the car came out of the car he got the little girl hand but got out for it and run down the street she run and run all the way down but the man way too fast.was the man going to get her? the girl was going to stop
but she was going to stop but she did not going to stop until she got home
to her mum. the girl was say in her head ‘not going to stop.not going to stop’ over and over the man was getting faster and fast to the little girl as she run then the girl was on the street that her house so she said MUM!!!!!. MUM!!!!!
then she got home to her mum and the mum call the cop’s
Tuesday, 29 October 2013
Friday, 25 October 2013
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